Kegel kicks ass.
Very well done. Well animated, funny, well-structured. Overall, a swell piece of work. The only flaw was the clown at the end...kind of a cop out, even if it's a funny one. A better ending woulda made it a 10. I expect VH1 or MTV will pick this one up soon...
Luis, keep going! The animation is already better than most I've seen -- and I've seen ALOT. You understand transitions, scene construction, graphic story-telling; all advanced stuff even most of the "pros" online have trouble with. I know this review should not be a personal note, but hell, stuff this promising should be encouraged directly. Very strong, emotive, stark.
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